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sadness by ~draco513:icondraco513:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


with eyes full of sorrow,
dreams of tomorrow,
seem so far away,
to late to say,
it's ok,

with a heart broken,
no word spoken,
about the sadness,
her life full of madness,
it's never going to be ok,

life full of rain.
no wonder she's insane,
her laugh has no soul,
her heart of coal,
why even try,

voices in her head,
none ever said,
none said it would be like this,
she grows silent with a kiss,
the kiss of death.
©2008-2009 ~draco513
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Submitted: April 25, 2008
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i worte this while in a mood....
please comment!!
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~lyriclover627:iconlyriclover627: Apr 25, 2008, 4:51:44 PM
Beautiful! Your rhyming is pretty good, i like it. Though, anyones rhyming is better than mine hehe. (:

This reminded me of HIM, ya kno, that song "Join me in death." (Look at my icon lol) But, not quite, it really is great, good job! :clap:
~SomethingSmall:iconSomethingSmall: Apr 25, 2008, 4:57:59 PM
I love the rhyme scheme! :dance:
the storyline is very meaningful
overall great job =D

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Learn from yesterday; Live for today; Hope for tomorrow
~draco513:icondraco513: Apr 25, 2008, 5:14:23 PM
lolz
=D thanks!

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okay, i'm not thirty fuking four ¬_¬ i'm a teenager, DOES MY DEVIANT ID LOOK LIKE I'M IN MY THIRTIES?!?!?!
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you ever thought about how much it sux to be the only single girl you know? :P oh well :P
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Fall Out Boy :heart:
~draco513:icondraco513: Apr 25, 2008, 5:14:57 PM
thanks!!! =D
X3

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okay, i'm not thirty fuking four ¬_¬ i'm a teenager, DOES MY DEVIANT ID LOOK LIKE I'M IN MY THIRTIES?!?!?!
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you ever thought about how much it sux to be the only single girl you know? :P oh well :P
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Fall Out Boy :heart:
~lyriclover627:iconlyriclover627: Apr 25, 2008, 5:53:57 PM
xD You're very welcome

:headbang:
~Skralo:iconSkralo: Apr 26, 2008, 7:51:52 AM
nice job. every thing you do is about dragons vampires or death. lol ;) Good job

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This is my bebo link [link]
This is my piczo link [link]
~draco513:icondraco513: Apr 26, 2008, 8:03:34 AM
is that my drawings you r describing.... or me??
lol
thnx dan

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okay, i'm not thirty fuking four ¬_¬ i'm a teenager, DOES MY DEVIANT ID LOOK LIKE I'M IN MY THIRTIES?!?!?!
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you ever thought about how much it sux to be the only single girl you know? :P oh well :P
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Fall Out Boy :heart:
~Skralo:iconSkralo: Apr 26, 2008, 2:43:37 PM
The drawings.... or maybe you.... Nope deffo the drawings. lol yw

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This is my bebo link [link]
This is my piczo link [link]
~draco513:icondraco513: Apr 26, 2008, 3:25:01 PM
XD

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okay, i'm not thirty fuking four ¬_¬ i'm a teenager, DOES MY DEVIANT ID LOOK LIKE I'M IN MY THIRTIES?!?!?!
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you ever thought about how much it sux to be the only single girl you know? :P oh well :P
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Fall Out Boy :heart:
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