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sadness by ~draco513:icondraco513:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


with eyes full of sorrow,
dreams of tomorrow,
seem so far away,
to late to say,
it's ok,

with a heart broken,
no word spoken,
about the sadness,
her life full of madness,
it's never going to be ok,

life full of rain.
no wonder she's insane,
her laugh has no soul,
her heart of coal,
why even try,

voices in her head,
none ever said,
none said it would be like this,
she grows silent with a kiss,
the kiss of death.
©2008-2009 ~draco513
:icondraco513:

Author's Comments

i worte this while in a mood....
please comment!!
xx

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:iconlyriclover627:
~lyriclover627 Apr 25, 2008, 3:51:44 PM
Beautiful! Your rhyming is pretty good, i like it. Though, anyones rhyming is better than mine hehe. (:

This reminded me of HIM, ya kno, that song "Join me in death." (Look at my icon lol) But, not quite, it really is great, good job! :clap:

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“Damaged people are dangerous because they know they can survive.”
:iconsomethingsmall:
~SomethingSmall Apr 25, 2008, 3:57:59 PM
I love the rhyme scheme! :dance:
the storyline is very meaningful
overall great job =D

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Learn from yesterday; Live for today; Hope for tomorrow
:icondraco513:
~draco513 Apr 25, 2008, 4:14:23 PM
lolz
=D thanks!

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Fuckin' Tony >.>

"No time to search the world around,
'Cause you know where I'll be found,
When i come around!"

"We are the cries of, The class of 13,
Born in the era of humility,
We are the desperate in the decline,
Raised by the bastards of 1969!"
:icondraco513:
~draco513 Apr 25, 2008, 4:14:57 PM
thanks!!! =D
X3

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Fuckin' Tony >.>

"No time to search the world around,
'Cause you know where I'll be found,
When i come around!"

"We are the cries of, The class of 13,
Born in the era of humility,
We are the desperate in the decline,
Raised by the bastards of 1969!"
:iconlyriclover627:
~lyriclover627 Apr 25, 2008, 4:53:57 PM
xD You're very welcome

:headbang:

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“Damaged people are dangerous because they know they can survive.”
:iconskralo:
~Skralo Apr 26, 2008, 6:51:52 AM
nice job. every thing you do is about dragons vampires or death. lol ;) Good job

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Youtube channels...

The Skrisso show:
Episode 1 :[link]
:icondraco513:
~draco513 Apr 26, 2008, 7:03:34 AM
is that my drawings you r describing.... or me??
lol
thnx dan

--
Fuckin' Tony >.>

"No time to search the world around,
'Cause you know where I'll be found,
When i come around!"

"We are the cries of, The class of 13,
Born in the era of humility,
We are the desperate in the decline,
Raised by the bastards of 1969!"
:iconskralo:
~Skralo Apr 26, 2008, 1:43:37 PM
The drawings.... or maybe you.... Nope deffo the drawings. lol yw

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Youtube channels...

The Skrisso show:
Episode 1 :[link]
:icondraco513:
~draco513 Apr 26, 2008, 2:25:01 PM
XD

--
Fuckin' Tony >.>

"No time to search the world around,
'Cause you know where I'll be found,
When i come around!"

"We are the cries of, The class of 13,
Born in the era of humility,
We are the desperate in the decline,
Raised by the bastards of 1969!"
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